Question
Revise the following sentences to make one of the existing sentences subordinate to the other.
People know they are going to have to retire; they often do not save enough money to do so comfortably. (this one is my answer, but I like the second one better)
People know they are going to retire, and often do not save enough money to do so comfortably
People know they are going to have to retire; they often do not save enough money to do so comfortably. (this one is my answer, but I like the second one better)
People know they are going to retire, and often do not save enough money to do so comfortably
Answers
GuruBlue
I would use the second one; however I would use 'but' in place of 'and'
Writeacher
Neither sentence has one of the clauses <b>subordinate</b> to the other.
Start with "Although" followed by the second clause; then use the first clause as the independent clause.
What do you get?
Start with "Although" followed by the second clause; then use the first clause as the independent clause.
What do you get?