Revise the following sentences so you could present them in a report to your Learning Coach. Be sure to remove any informal language and use jargon where appropriate.
Today I learned some sick stuff about volcanoes! The hot, dangerous stuff comes outta the top where it sometimes goes boom! The red stuff can be sticky or runny. These things cause lotsa damage. But they can help out sometimes, too.
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This is the answer to this question is. Today I learned some interesting things about volcanoes. The hot, dangerous, lava comes out of the top of the volcano, where it can sometimes explode. The lava can be sticky, or runny. These things cause a lot of damage but can help sometimes as well. you can copy and past this into the paragraph part of your assignment
thx this really helped your awsome.