Question

Is this good thesis? How can I make it better?

This book is not only mysterious, but it also can relate to readers through emotions, such as jealousy and hatred.

Thank you

Answer 1

What is mysterious about the book? Is it a mystery novel, or is something about it unknown? And I think that the book may APPEAL to readers by involving their emotions, or through the depictions of jealousy and hatred. "relate to"?

Answer 2

Is this thesis better?

This book is not only a mystery novel, but also appeals to readers through the depictions of jealousy and hatred.

Thank you.