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Could this be a good thesis? Could you please help me? In today's society many middle class people argue why they can not build wealth could this be because of wrong choices?

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Ms. Sue
Let's shorten it to this.

Many middle class people argue why they can not build wealth.
PsyDAG
In today's society, many middle class people argue that they cannot build wealth because of wrong choices.

This is a better statement of the thesis, but I don't know how you will be able to support it.
Ms. Sue
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
antonio
Thank you so much Ms Sue

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