Asked by Dianne

I need a god thesis for this A good citizen is a great for society. She or he feels that she/he has certain responsibilities towards the state, the responsibilities of being loyal and honest. just as the state has certain responsibilities towards him. Although, she /he is aware of the privileges and his or her duties A good citizen takes intelligent interest in politics, so that she or he may use his or her vote for the good of the country and the nations.

please help
Answered by Ms. Sue
Societies need good citizens.

Answered by Dianne
thank you and sue does the thesis at the end of my 8 sentence paragraph sound okay . A good citizen is a great for society. She or he feels that she/he has certain responsibilities towards the state, the responsibilities of being loyal and honest. just as the state has certain responsibilities towards him. Although, she /he is aware of the privileges and his or her duties A good citizen takes intelligent interest in politics, so that she or he may use his or her vote for the good of the country and the nations.

Answered by Dianne
sorry here is the correct one
A good citizen is a great for society. She or he feels that she/he has certain responsibilities towards the state, the responsibilities of being loyal and honest. just as the state has certain responsibilities towards him. Although, she /he is aware of the privileges and his or her duties A good citizen takes intelligent interest in politics, so that she or he may use his or her vote for the good of the country and the nations. All Americans vote some say it’s not worth it does that mean there not a good citizen .
Answered by Ms. Sue
The last sentence is not a thesis statement. It's a detail supporting the thesis.

You also need to proofread this carefully.
Answered by Dianne
okay can you help on a idea for a thesis
Answered by Ms. Sue
There are several errors in your last sentence.

It is not a good thesis because your paragraph is not solely about voting.

Answered by Dianne
okay I will fix my paragraph and than could I use my last sentence as a thesis
Answered by Ms. Sue
No.

The best thesis is the one I suggested.
Answered by Dianne
okay Thank you
Answered by Ms. Sue
You're welcome.