A is much better.
B is too long and wordy.
which is a better thesis
A. Because it has become outdated, the electoral college should be replaced by a system that allows the US president to be elected by direct popular vote.
B. Rather than voting for a presidential candidate, voters in a US presidential election merely choose their state's electoral college representatives, who actually vote for the president. In most states, all of the electoral votes go to the candidate who wins the popular vote in that state, no matter how close the outcome.
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