Question
I need to re-write this sentence in a different light that would make it seem more correct. I am suppose to write it five different ways, I have written it in three other ways but I cannot come up with two more.
The sentence is:
Teen marketed films, try to apply different methods in an attempt to get teens to spend big buck, this is not right.
How can I rearrange this sentence or make it sound better?
The sentence is:
Teen marketed films, try to apply different methods in an attempt to get teens to spend big buck, this is not right.
How can I rearrange this sentence or make it sound better?
Answers
SraJMcGin
Without seeing what you have already written, hopefully this will not be one of those!
It is not right that teen-marketed films try to apply different methods, in an attempt to get teens to spend big bucks. (bucks should be plural)
Teen-marketed films try to apply different methods, attempting to get teens to spend big bucks and this is not right.
Sra
Sra
It is not right that teen-marketed films try to apply different methods, in an attempt to get teens to spend big bucks. (bucks should be plural)
Teen-marketed films try to apply different methods, attempting to get teens to spend big bucks and this is not right.
Sra
Sra