Actually, no. The idea was looking out the window? The bear was running along the road when it came out from the trees? How can a boy be walking and jumping at the same time?
They all need to be clearer about who was doing the looking, running, etc.
"While I was walking in the park, I saw a boy who was jumping on and on."
1. Looking out the window, a good idea occurred to me.
2. Running along the road, a giant bear came out from the trees.
3. Walking in the park, a boy was jumping on and on.
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Would you look at the sentences above? Are they okay in everyday conversation? Or do we have to correct the errors?
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