Asked by jess
April 20,2016
Genecito Jimenez
Lot 32 Blk 96 Bautista st. Zone 10 Dasmarinas City Cavite.
tel: 046-4725645
Dear Sir,
Mrs. Maria Teresa P. Eleon is permanently staying in my apartment with her family and she is a good person in our community.
Please kindly allow her to open a new Bank account in your bank.
Thank you for your kind consideration.
thank you.
Genecito Jimenez
Answers
Answered by
Reed
"bank" should not be capitalized.
Your "School Subject" exhibits very poor grammar. "Sentence" is a noun and cannot have a past tense ("sentenced") in this context, unless you are discussing a criminal who has been sentenced to some punishment. Proofread for typographical errors, too. I think you mean grammar, not rammar.
Your "School Subject" exhibits very poor grammar. "Sentence" is a noun and cannot have a past tense ("sentenced") in this context, unless you are discussing a criminal who has been sentenced to some punishment. Proofread for typographical errors, too. I think you mean grammar, not rammar.
Answered by
Writeacher
If you proofread and re-post your letter, <b>please omit any personal contact information</b> (address, phone number, etc.).