Question

THE PROMPTS:TAKE A POSITION THAT DEFENDS OR CHALLENGES THE CLAIM THAT THE RECENT PROFUSION OF SURVEILLANCE TECHNOLOGIES CONSTITUTES A THREAT TO CIVIL LIBERTY.
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The example Introduction is :

George Orwell wrote "1984", a novel suggest by the year 1984, the world could fall under the rule of a totalitarian regime that would monitor its citizens every move. A "Surveillance Society" threatens civil liberties in a way that mirrors Orwell's fears.
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The teacher said the thesis is clear but the introduction lacks style and originality. How could I fix it?? I really need help.

Answer 1

This is YOUR assignment. You could elaborate a little on just HOW surveillance threatens liberties, or how it does in Orwell's novel. You think it through and find something that would catch the reader's attention, rather than just a plain statement about Orwell's book.