Asked by Amy

Can someone help me fix my Introduction/story seeing if everything is in it's correct imparfait and past tense?

Story:

1. Quand j'etais Mars.
2. Il y avait une fille qui s'appellait Noor.
3. Elle avait quinze ans.
4. Elle était très petite .
5. Elle vivait dans la ville .
6. Elle vivait dans une petite maison avec sa mère et son frère aîné .
7. Ils vivaient en Californie .
8. Noor aimait la plage .
9. Elle aimait la brise de l'océan .
10. Noor traveled with her mom and brother to Indonesia.


Answered by Ms. Sue
I'll send this to our French expert, SraJMcGin.

Answered by SraJMcGin
1. When I was March?
N problem with the French. Did you want #10 in French?

10. Noor voyageait avec sa mère et son frère à la Indonesia.

I'll flag this and come back later in case you have questions.

Sra
Answered by Josh
For #1 I meant-

Hier était le lundi .

Oh yes, thankyou for catching that. Yes I'd like that in French too & you helped with that already. As far as everything else, are my accents right and the sentences are correct??
Answered by SraJMcGin
le lundi means ON Monday.
1. Hier était lundi.
Everything else is fine.

Sra
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