Asked by Susan

Revise the following sentences so that the subject and verb of each sentence identify key actors and actions:

• The dedication of professors to multiculturalism is crucial to encouraging students of all races to succeed.

o To encourage students of all races to succeed, it is crucial that professors be dedicated to multiculturalism.

• Currently, the percentage of full-time African-American professors teaching in American universities is less than eight.

In American Universities less than eight percent of African-American professors are currently teaching full time.
Answered by Ms. Sue
Professors embracing multiculturalism encourage students of all races to succeed.

There's the first one. I'll be glad to comment on your revisions of the other sentences.

Answered by Susan
ok i'm working on it
Answered by Susan
African American professors teaching full time at American universities is less than eight percent

Less than eight percent of the professors at American Universities are African American.
Answered by Ms. Sue
No.

Eight percent are -- doesn't clearly identify the key actors and actions.

Answered by Susan
In American Universities African-American professors are currently teaching full time.

In American Universities less than eight percent of the professors are African American
Answered by Ms. Sue
You haven't changed the subject and verb.

Answered by Susan
i'm going back to the books
Answered by chris vet tech
Less than eight percent of African-American professors are teaching full-time in American Universities.

would that work Ms. Sue?
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