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Various approaches to prevent steroids in sports have not been successful because athletes are now using hard-to-detect growth
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Drug testing before and after games hasn't changed the number of athletes who now secretively use Growth Hormones that are tough
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Is this a good thesis statement or is it too broad with the 4th Amendment part ?
Should i Cut it out ? An analysis on different
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My professor claims this is not arguing anything still. "This is still not an argument, but a statement. It's a description of the current situation, but what are you arguing? You must analyze different options, sides, and points of view in an argument.
I hope I do well on this paper because writing this thesis was the hardest. Thanks for all your help I really do appreciate it !!
or... Various approaches to prevent steroids in sports have not bin successful because athletes are now using hard to detect growth hormones which calls for a analysis of better approaches I hope you are patient with me .
Honestly ! What would you advise me to stick to at this point . Because I have attempted writing atleast 5 thesis statements and I am dreaded !! If I go about the statement I put above I do not have enough sources to defend my argument either . Please do
Originally I was trying to find out what is the better method to prevent steroids in sports because I already had many sources which have researched the different approaches to discouraging using steroids... but I just did not know how to word it.. As a
Well Growth Hormones have become relatively hard to detect because we make them within our bodies. which is what I found out through research
Sorry* Is this a better thesis ?
So should I say . An analysis on different methods to ban steroids in sports brings a challenge to the sports industry: drug testing before and after games hasn't changed the number of athletes who secretively use the type of steroids which cannot be
