Question

Drug testing before and after games hasn't changed the number of athletes who now secretively use Growth Hormones that are tough to detect through ordinary methods like urine samples.

Answer 1

Sorry* Is this a better thesis ?

Answer 2

Still too much.

End the sentence after hormones.

Answer 3

Honestly ! What would you advise me to stick to at this point . Because I have attempted writing atleast 5 thesis statements and I am dreaded !!

If I go about the statement I put above I do not have enough sources to defend my argument either .


Please do advise

Answer 4

or...

Various approaches to prevent steroids in sports have not bin successful because athletes are now using hard to detect growth hormones which calls for a analysis of better approaches


I hope you are patient with me .

Answer 5

Sure -- I'm patient. :-)

I suggest you stick with this:

<b>Various approaches to prevent steroids in sports have not been successful because athletes are now using hard-to-detect growth hormones.</b>

Answer 6

I hope I do well on this paper because writing this thesis was the hardest.

Thanks for all your help I really do appreciate it !!

Answer 7

You're very welcome. I'm sure you'll do well on this paper.