Asked by Tharima

Drug testing before and after games hasn't changed the number of athletes who now secretively use Growth Hormones that are tough to detect through ordinary methods like urine samples.
Answered by Tharima
Sorry* Is this a better thesis ?
Answered by Ms. Sue
Still too much.

End the sentence after hormones.



Answered by Tharima
Honestly ! What would you advise me to stick to at this point . Because I have attempted writing atleast 5 thesis statements and I am dreaded !!

If I go about the statement I put above I do not have enough sources to defend my argument either .


Please do advise
Answered by Tharima
or...

Various approaches to prevent steroids in sports have not bin successful because athletes are now using hard to detect growth hormones which calls for a analysis of better approaches


I hope you are patient with me .
Answered by Ms. Sue
Sure -- I'm patient. :-)

I suggest you stick with this:

<b>Various approaches to prevent steroids in sports have not been successful because athletes are now using hard-to-detect growth hormones.</b>

Answered by Tharima
I hope I do well on this paper because writing this thesis was the hardest.

Thanks for all your help I really do appreciate it !!
Answered by Ms. Sue
You're very welcome. I'm sure you'll do well on this paper.

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