Your idea is good. But you don't have a sentence. Take a stand -- which were they? Then draft a sentence stating your thesis.
These sites will help you.
http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/thesis.html
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/545/01/
would The Apache Tribe, enemy or fighting men, be a good thesis statement for a 15 page essay i have to write? i had tons of information.
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