The two revisions that would make the sentence more precise are:
- replace "took a look at" with "read"
- replace "text" with "manuscript"
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replace "edit" with "work on"
replace took a look at with "read"
replace "text" with "manuscript
replace "employee" with "editor"
replace "agreed with "consented"
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The two revisions that would make the sentence more precise are: