The two revisions that would make the sentence more precise are:
- Replace “employee” with “editor”
- Replace “took a look at” with “read”
These changes clarify the role of the person and denote a more specific action regarding the work.
The employee took a look at the writers work and agreed to edit the text
Which revisions would make the sentence more precise? Select the two correct answers
Replace “employee” with “editor”
Replace “took a look at” with “read”
Replace “edit” with “work on”
Replace “text” with “manuscript”
Replace “agreed” with “consented”
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