The employee took a look at the writers work and agreed to edit the text

Question

Which revisions would make the sentence more precise? Select the two correct answers

Replace “employee” with “editor”
Replace “took a look at” with “read”
Replace “edit” with “work on”
Replace “text” with “manuscript”
Replace “agreed” with “consented”

Answer 1

The two revisions that would make the sentence more precise are:

1. Replace “employee” with “editor”
2. Replace “took a look at” with “read”

These changes clarify the role of the person and denote a more specific action regarding the work.