which one is better

Question

Panel C presents preclinical data on fetal hemoglobin (HbF) as a percentage of total hemoglobin after gene editing and erythroid cell differentiation. The data are derived from samples of 10 healthy donors, with error bars representing the standard deviation.

Panel C shows that CRISPR gene editing significantly increased fetal hemoglobin as a percentage of total hemoglobin in erythroid cells from 10 healthy donors, with error bars indicating the standard deviation of the results.

Answer 1

The second option is better because it provides more specific and concise information about the results of the experiment. It clearly states the impact of CRISPR gene editing on fetal hemoglobin levels and includes the number of donors and the standard deviation, which gives a more precise understanding of the data.