what = it is a team sport played on ice
who = people from all over the world come to play this sport
when = it is played in winter. it was staged at the olympics since 1920
where = it is played in areas that are really cold such as canada, the u.s, etc.
why = it is played because it is really popular
how = it is played by a stick on ice
i extremely need help
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Looks good. What is your specific assignment?
have to pick a sport and write about it. i have to put this in paragraph form now. may i post the paragraph here?
is that info good for a high school level?
Yes. Please post your paragraph here. Are you only supposed to write one paragraph?
one good paragraph on a sport which we know a little bit about. could you also look over at it and correct any stuff. i kind of want it to have hard words in it-high level paragraph.
Ice hockey has been stages at the Olympics since 1920. It is Canada's national game and a significant addition to world sport. it is played seriously by men and women in 20 countries. Ice hockey is a fast-paced, antipathetic sport in which two teams of six players compete to push a hard rubber puck into the opposing team's goal for a score. Players use their sticks or feet to move the puck across the ice. A goalie protects his/her team's goal. The teams can be men's, women's, or co'ed. There are lots of of skills needed for this sport. You have to be flexible, strong, have a good coordination, and hava a good balance. The fitness factor fo this game is high. You have to be wearing all your hockey gear before you can play.
Ice hockey has been stages at the Olympics since 1920. It is Canada's national game and a significant addition to world sport. it is played seriously by men and women in 20 countries. Ice hockey is a fast-paced, antipathetic sport in which two teams of six players compete to push a hard rubber puck into the opposing team's goal for a score. Players use their sticks or feet to move the puck across the ice. A goalie protects his/her team's goal. The teams can be men's, women's, or co'ed. There are lots of of skills needed for this sport. You have to be flexible, strong, have a good coordination, and hava a good balance. The fitness factor fo this game is high. You have to be wearing all your hockey gear before you can play.
i meant staged
This is very good.
But, I suggest you find a better word than "antipathetic." I'm not sure what you intended here.
But, I suggest you find a better word than "antipathetic." I'm not sure what you intended here.
how about repulsive? i want to say that it's a very like game with angerness involved, fights can happen
this is pretty good, but some things are spelt wrong. Thank you for this, since i missed a class of p.e. my teacher wants a paragraph. Haha.
i think it was really good just try to fix that one were you type hava instead of have a, but other than that it was really good.
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