First, your thesis must be a sentence. Your "thesis" is not a complete sentence.
Check these sites for details about thesis statements.
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/545/01/
http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/thesis.html
After you've come up with a good thesis statement, then what are you going to say in its defense?
What is your thesis?
My thesis is The obesity prevention programs and their guidelines that inspire health centers, and weight centers to concentrate on the physically, mentally and social part of the whole child.
How do you plan to support this thesis?
Suggest ways to avoid fallacies in your thesis.
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