Asked by sharon
can anyone please help me? I am having to write an essay on Protecting Freedom of Expression by Derek Bok ,I have come up with a thesis but my teacher says no can some one help me with a arguemental thesis. new thesis how does this sound? Thesis: Using confederate flags and swastikas to protect the freedom of expression should no
be allowed because of the controversy that it causes among students on campus.
be allowed because of the controversy that it causes among students on campus.
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<i>Thesis: Using confederate flags and swastikas to protect the freedom of expression should not be allowed because of the controversy that it causes among students on campus.</i>
It's a thesis statement because your opinion is in there ("should not be allowed"), but it's not very strong. Take a good look at the 5th example here:
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
How can you make your thesis stronger and more specific?
It's a thesis statement because your opinion is in there ("should not be allowed"), but it's not very strong. Take a good look at the 5th example here:
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
How can you make your thesis stronger and more specific?
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