Use the sentence to complete the activity.

Question

The "child" "held on" to his mother as the "train" "went" by the platform.

Revise the sentence by making the quoted words more precise, adding at least one adjective or adverb, and adding at least one sensory detail.

Answer 1

The frightened toddler held tightly onto his mother's soft hand as the loud, fast train rushed past the crowded platform, its wheels screeching against the tracks.