Use the sentence to complete the activity.

The *child held* on to his mother as the *train went* by the platform.

Revise the sentence by making the asterisk words more precise, adding at least one adjective or adverb, and adding at least one sensory detail.

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The terrified child tightly clasped his mother's hand as the loud and roaring train thundered by the crowded platform.
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