Use the prompt to rewrite Langston Hughes's short story "Thank You, M'am" entirely from Roger's perspective. Make sure you add a twist (change) the ending. Use the rubric provided in class to check your writing.

Extended Response
“Man, I want some blue suede shoes. All I can think about are those shoes! Clarence showed up to school last week looking extra sharp! Bump it... I’m going to FIND a way to get those shoes… Let me hit the streets. It’s 11 o’clock at night, so I’m going to see what I can get into."

"Well, well, well... Looka here. Look at this old lady walking by herself. I know how I’m going to get those blue shoes now! I’m snatching this old lady’s purse, but first, let me try to figure out how to work my way through this because this lady is LARGE! Look at that purse! It looks like she has everything in it but hammer and nails! And the strap is long and slung across her shoulder… See, I’ve got to really figure this one out. How am I going to steal her purse when it is across her shoulder? If I’m fast enough, she won’t be able to catch me anyway, and if I grab it hard, I can break that strap! Welp! Here goes nothing!" I took a deep breath and ran full speed.

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I dashed toward her, heart pounding, adrenaline surging. “This is it; this is how I’m getting those blue suede shoes,” I thought, fixating on the sleek, luxurious footwear that danced in my mind like a beacon. Clarence had first worn them, and now they were my dream, my obsession. Just a quick grab and I'd have the cash to make it a reality.

The old woman was bigger than I expected, but I was already too far gone to back down. I calculated the perfect angle then lunged, yanking the purse from her shoulder. “Man, I’ve got this! Easy pickings!” But she caught me off guard. Her grip tightened on her bag, and suddenly I was in a tug-of-war I hadn’t anticipated. I met her gaze, startled by the fire I saw in her eyes—this was no ordinary old lady.

“Let go, you little thief!” she shouted, her voice surprisingly powerful, like a thunderclap in the quiet of the night. I yanked harder, adrenaline giving me strength, but she held on like it was her lifeline. In that split second, I felt a pang of doubt. Was stealing worth this fight? I had only wanted those shoes—

Then she surprised me again. Instead of letting go, she yanked back with such force that I stumbled. She had a look of determination, like she’d seen much worse than some punk trying to snatch her purse.

“No one deserves to steal from anyone,” she said, her voice steady despite the struggle. I must’ve looked shocked because for the first time, I hesitated. I could have bolted right then, but her words pierced through the haze of my intentions.

“What—what do you mean?” My voice trembled, and I found myself meeting her gaze, drawn in by something I couldn’t name.

“Stealing won’t get you what you want, son,” she replied, surprisingly calm amidst the chaos. “You think those shoes will make you someone? You need to learn how to earn, not take.”

In that moment, something shifted within me. I released my grip on the purse, stepping back, bewildered. “I just… wanted those shoes.”

“Then work for them,” she said, releasing her guard but keeping the bag close. “That’s the only way you’ll appreciate what you have.” A silence settled between us. The night air felt charged, as if the moon stood still to watch this unexpected exchange.

I took a deep breath. “I-I don’t have a job,” I confessed, feeling my pride slip away. “I was just desperate.”

“Desperation can lead to worse things, child; it can trap you,” she said softly. “But I can help you. Let’s get you on a better path.”

It was an offer I never expected. With startled eyes, I looked at her. The struggle had subsided, and all I felt was confusion mixed with a sliver of hope. Instead of fleeing, I stood there, wanting to trust her wisdom and her surprising kindness.

“I don’t know what to do,” I admitted, urgency creeping back in.

“Then come with me,” she responded. “I’ll show you how to earn a pair of shoes, and we can get you on the right track. You don’t need to chase dreams through theft.”

And just like that, I found myself following her, not just out of fear but drawn by the possibility she offered. Those blue suede shoes suddenly didn’t seem as important as the chance to change my life. Maybe, just maybe, being someone worth more than a purse was the real treasure.

As we walked away from the shadows of the street, I turned back to steal one last glance at the old lady, but now, I thought of her not just as a victim but a mentor. My dreams might just need a new approach.