Use the prompt to rewrite Langston Hughes's short story "Thank You, M'am" entirely from Roger's perspective. Make sure you add a twist (change) the ending. Use the rubric provided in class to check your writing.

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“Man, I want some blue suede shoes. All I can think about are those shoes! Clarence showed up to school last week looking extra sharp! Bump it... I’m going to FIND a way to get those shoes… Let me hit the streets. It’s 11 o’clock at night, so I’m going to see what I can get into."

"Well, well, well... Looka here. Look at this old lady walking by herself. I know how I’m going to get those blue shoes now! I’m snatching this old lady’s purse, but first, let me try to figure out how to work my way through this because this lady is LARGE! Look at that purse! It looks like she has everything in it but hammer and nails! And the strap is long and slung across her shoulder… See, I’ve got to really figure this one out. How am I going to steal her purse when it is across her shoulder? If I’m fast enough, she won’t be able to catch me anyway, and if I grab it hard, I can break that strap! Welp! Here goes nothing!" I took a deep breath and ran full speed.

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As I sprinted toward her, my mind raced with visions of those blue suede shoes glistening under the bright lights of the mall. "Just think of how cool I'd look, rocking those kicks at school," I thought. The weight of my decision felt heavy, but the allure of those shoes pulled me closer to my target. Before I knew it, my hand shot out, aiming for the purse.

But then everything changed. That lady wasn’t just any old woman; she was a force to be reckoned with! As soon as my fingers made contact with her purse, she spun around with surprising speed for someone her size. In that moment, I felt a surge of panic. I was about to be caught, and I hesitated.

"Hey there, young man! What do you think you're doing?" she barked, her voice deep and commanding. I stumbled back, my adrenaline spiking as I tried to catch my breath. “N-nothing, ma’am. Just…just passing by,” I stammered, my bravado evaporating.

She looked me over with piercing eyes that seemed to see right through me. "You need those shoes that bad? What’s your name, boy?"

I paused. Nobody had ever called me ‘boy’ like that before. “R-Roger,” I muttered, not quite sure what to expect.

“Well, Roger,” she said, crossing her arms. “I can see you’re in a bit of a bind. But tell me, is this really how you want to go about getting what you want?”

I felt my face flush with embarrassment. “Look, I just... I don’t have any other way,” I confessed. “I want to fit in. I want to be like everyone else.”

She softened slightly, her gaze no longer intimidating. “You think stealing is the way to fit in? You’ll never be respected if you take what doesn’t belong to you.” There was a long pause as I considered her words. For the first time, I was actually listening.

Suddenly, the lightbulb went on. “But how do I get the shoes then?” I asked, genuinely curious.

Her expression shifted from frustration to something almost compassionate. “You know, I used to want things just as badly as you do,” she said. “Shoes, clothes—everything. But you have to work for what you want. I can teach you how to earn money, Roger. You can help me with my errands, and I’ll pay you. In time… you’ll be able to buy those shoes yourself.”

My heart raced. Here I was, on the brink of making a terrible mistake, and instead of turning me in or scaring me off, she was offering me a lifeline. “Really?” I asked, a sense of hope bubbling within me.

“Really,” she replied with a warm smile. “But first, let’s get your head straight. You can’t steal from people. You have to show them that you are better and that you can be trusted. Are you up for that?”

In that moment, something inside me shifted. The cool, flashy desire for the shoes faded. “Yeah, I think I can do that,” I said, my voice firm.

That night, instead of being a thief, I walked away from the encounter with a new sense of purpose. No longer just a kid with a craving for shoes, I was now someone who saw a chance to change my life. And with that decision, I did something unexpected: I turned around, ready to walk with her and learn how to earn integrity along with blue suede shoes.