The revision that would introduce personification to make the description more vivid is to replace "blew" with "howled." This choice gives the wind a more dynamic and lively quality, suggesting it has a voice and personality.
Use the paragraph to answer the question. The wind blew. The leaves shook on the branches, nearly ready—but not quite—to let go for the fall. In the river, a ripple spread over the calm water. Which revision would introduce personification to make the description more vivid? (1 point) Responses replace “blew” with “gusted” replace “blew” with “gusted” add “like butter” after “spread” add “like butter” after “spread” add “as quick as lightning” after “spread” add “as quick as lightning” after “spread” replace “blew” with “howled”
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