The best revision that would introduce personification to make the description more vivid is:
a replace “blew” with “howled”
This change gives the wind a human-like quality, making it more vivid and expressive.
use the paragraph to answer the question.
the wind blew. The leaves shook on the branches, nearly ready- but not quite- to let go for the fall. In the river, a ripple spread over the water.
which revision would introduce personification to make the description more vivid?
a replace “blew” with “howled”
b add “as quick as lightning” after “spread”
c replace “blew” with “gusted”
d add “like butter” after “spread”
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