The most effective revision to introduce hyperbole and make the description more vivid would be to replace “hours” with “the rest of my life.” This exaggeration emphasizes the intensity of the music experience.
Use the paragraph to answer the question.
The music played so loud I knew my ears would be ringing for hours. The band rocked. We thumped our feet to the beat and shouted along with the lyrics.
Which revision would introduce hyperbole to make the description more vivid?
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replace “rocked” with “was on fire”
replace “rocked” with “was on fire”
add “at the top of our lungs” after “shouted”
add “at the top of our lungs” after “shouted”
add “like maniacs” after “shouted”
add “like maniacs” after “shouted”
replace “hours” with “the rest of my life”
replace “hours” with “the rest of my life”
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