The music played so loud I knew my ears would be ringing for hours. The band rocked. We thumped our feet to the beat and shouted along with the lyrics.
Which revision would introduce hyperbole to make the description more vivid?
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replace “hours” with “the rest of my life”
replace “hours” with “the rest of my life”
replace “rocked” with “was on fire”
replace “rocked” with “was on fire”
add “like maniacs” after “shouted”
add “like maniacs” after “shouted”
add “at the top of our lungs” after “shouted”
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The best revision that introduces hyperbole to make the description more vivid is:
replace “hours” with “the rest of my life”
This change amplifies the impact of the music on the narrator's experience, exaggerating the effect of the loudness on their ears.
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