The best revision that would introduce hyperbole to make the description more vivid is:
replace “hours” with “the rest of my life”
This change exaggerates the impact of the loud music on the ears, emphasizing the intensity of the experience.
The music played so loud I knew my ears would be ringing for hours. The band rocked. We thumped our feet to the beat and shouted along with the lyrics.
Which revision would introduce hyperbole to make the description more vivid?
(1 point)
Responses
add “at the top of our lungs” after “shouted”
add “at the top of our lungs” after “shouted”
replace “hours” with “the rest of my life”
replace “hours” with “the rest of my life”
add “like maniacs” after “shouted”
add “like maniacs” after “shouted”
replace “rocked” with “was on fire”
replace “rocked” with “was on fire”
The best revision that would introduce hyperbole to make the description more vivid is:
replace “hours” with “the rest of my life”
This change exaggerates the impact of the loud music on the ears, emphasizing the intensity of the experience.