The best revision that would introduce hyperbole to make the description more vivid is to replace “hours” with “the rest of my life.” This exaggeration emphasizes the loudness of the music and its impact on the speaker’s ears in a more vivid manner.
Use the paragraph to answer the question.
The music played so loud I knew my ears would be ringing for hours. The band rocked. We thumped our feet to the beat and shouted along with the lyrics.
Which revision would introduce hyperbole to make the description more vivid?
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add “like maniacs” after “shouted”
add “like maniacs” after “shouted”
add “at the top of our lungs” after “shouted”
add “at the top of our lungs” after “shouted”
replace “rocked” with “was on fire”
replace “rocked” with “was on fire”
replace “hours” with “the rest of my life”
replace “hours” with “the rest of my life”
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