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Question

Dear hiring guy,
I saw your job on the Internet, and I’d like to apply. I’d make a great summer custodian, because I love amusement parks, I don’t have school in the summer, and I’m a really fun, happy guy. The job sounds really easy so I’m sure I’ll be fine. Besides I’d like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you’re ready for me to start work. I’ve included my résumé with this email.
Sincerely,
Kurt gardener
In 3 to 5 sentences, rewrite Kurtz cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation

Answer 1

Dear Hiring Manager,

I recently came across your job posting online and I am writing to express my interest in the summer custodian position. I believe I would be well-suited for this role due to my affinity for amusement parks, availability during the summer months, and my positive and energetic demeanor. The job responsibilities appear to be manageable and therefore, I am confident in my ability to excel. Additionally, I am eager to earn some income in order to save up for a new gaming console. Please inform me of the appropriate time for me to commence my duties. Furthermore, I have attached my résumé for your perusal.

Thank you for considering my application.

Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener