Use the letter to complete the activity.

Dear Hiring Guy,
I saw your job on the Internet, and I'd like to apply. I'd make a great summer custodian, because I love amusement parks, I don't have school in the summer, and I'm a really fun, happy guy. The job sounds really easy, so I'm sure I'll be fine. Besides. I'd like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you're ready for me to start work. I've included my resume with this email.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
In 3-5 sentences, rewrite Kurt's cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation.

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Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across your job posting on the Internet and I am writing to express my interest in the position. I believe that I would be well-suited for the role of a summer custodian based on my genuine passion for amusement parks, my availability during the summer months, and my positive and enthusiastic nature. I am confident in my ability to excel in this position as it appears to be straightforward. Additionally, I am motivated to earn income towards the purchase of a new gaming system. I have enclosed my resume for your review. Please let me know when you would like me to commence work.
Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener