Today I am very busy, so would you like to go to classes by yourself? I have to grade students' activities.Their attitude grades, handout grades should be graded. Then I have to enter grade information on NEIS (This is a kind of program where teachers enter information.). OK? Thank you.
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That sounds very pleasant and informative as to what needs to be done.
I agree with GuruBlue. You've written nice smooth sentences. My only suggestion is that you put an "and" in place of the comma after "grades" in the 3rd sentence.