Keep working on commas, and remember to put a space after every comma, period, etc.
Sounds good.
To... jtalbot can really do e-mail address her
Subject.. important meeting
From my e-mail address here
June 6, 2008
Dear Ms. Talbot,
Mr. Smith would like to set up a lunch meeting with you for next Wednesday at two o'clock.
Mr. Rory Webster, the assistant manager, will also be attending the meeting. He has some great ideas for a project that Mr. Smith would like you to be a part of. The project consists of a detailed infomational packet that will allow our company to grow.Ms Talbot as you know you play a key role in our sucess. If you're able to attend the meeting, please let me know, so I can make reservations at the King Charles Hotel on River Street for two o'clock. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you in advance for your time in this matter.
Sincerely,
Kaleigh-Anne Peters
Office Manager
Columbia Hospital
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This is what I came up with thanks so much for your help :)
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