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Ghost Babies Haunted their Mothers
“The mother” is a poem about a woman who is guilty to have (is guilty having) several abortions and she is regardful (not the best word = careful/conscientious?) about her decisions. But it seems to be that she has no other choice. As a mother, she is regardful(change the word) and could not do certain things which (a) mother (is) supposed to do with her kids. Through the use of mournful regret, (Gwendolyn Brooks) shows how a woman’s choice to have an abortion reveals her regret and hunted (you began in the Present Tense, so stay there = haunts) her emotionally for the rest of her life.
She is not proud of what she did. She is at fault and is ashamed. The woman thinks that she is hunted (not hunted, but haunted) by her aborted children. Her guilt makes them live. She hears ghostly voices of her killed children. This voice reminded (reminds) her of the pain they were going through during abortion. It might be possible that any how (that no matter how) she justifies by (this to) others but(delete "but") she can’t forgive herself(for) what she has done.(2 spaces after a period) She realizes that they were more than a blob of cells.
She seems to be regardful(regretful/remorseful) but she also claims that she made the right decision at the time. It might be possible that her financial crises lead (led = Past Tense here) her to make this decision. If she gave birth to them, she wouldn't have been able to care for the children. Most parents make this decision because of their financial problems. They think they (parents or children?) would have a better fate being dead than if they were in their care. People wonder who havn’t (spelling = haven't) had an abortion that what(delete "what" = that that) would be a horrible situation that she couldn't care for her children. What would be worse than being dead?
Abortion can provide rapid relief but delayed suffering. It’s been many years that she aborted the children but her suffering never stop.(stops) Besides the emotional suffering, (this) woman also suffers Post-Traumatic Stress disorder. Guilt is probably the most common symptom of a Post-Abortion-Syndrome. These symptoms appear five to ten years later in life. Not only mothers, but also partners, parents, siblings and other family members may experience post-abortion reactions, including guilt, anxiety and damaged relationships. Anybody who pressures a woman into having an abortion may later be unable to enjoy a relationship with that woman. After abortion, (a or the) mother’s different kinds of complexes shows (show = subject "kinds" is plural) that they still carry a huge burdan (spelling = burden) of guilt, maybe as huge as having children and caring for them.
The consequences of an abortion can include guilt, depression, mourning, shame, self-hatred, regret, and sadness of(for) a mother. Aborting a child has created much debate in our society. It is not considered a good act, morally or religious.(adverb = religiously) It creates a sense of guilt in mothers . Like the auther (spelling = author) of this poem, no one could be happy by making this decision. .Now, she is trying to justfy(spelling = justify it) through this poem. She claims that she did love them with all her heart and she says to her babies:
“Believe me I love you all/believe me, I knew you, though fainty,(spelling = faintly) and I loved, I loved all” (132).
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this is y reasrech paper about a poem in which mother have abortion and she is not happy.i m worried about grammar mistakes ,can someone please check it for me?
Ghost Babies Haunted their Mothers
“The mother” is a poem about a woman who is guilty to have several abortions and she is regardful about her decisions. But it seems to be that she has no other choice. As a mother, she is regardful and could not do certain things which mother supposed to do with her kids. Through the use of mournful regret, (Gwendolyn Brooks) shows how a woman’s choice to have an abortion reveals her regret and hunted her emotionally for the rest of her life.
She is not proud of what she did. She is at fault and is ashamed. The woman thinks that she is hunted by her aborted children. Her guilt makes them live. She hears ghostly voices of her killed children. This voice reminded her of the pain they were going through during abortion. It might be possible that any how she justifies by others but she can’t forgive herself what she has done.She realizes that they were more than a blob of cells.
She seems to be regardful but she also claims that she made the right decision at the time. It might be possible that her financial crises lead her to make this decision. If she gave birth to them, she wouldn't have been able to care for the children. Most parents make this decision because of their financial problems. They think they would have a better fate being dead than if they were in their care. People wonder who havn’t had an abortion that what would be a horrible situation that she couldn't care for her children. What would be worse than being dead?
Abortion can provide rapid relief but delayed suffering. It’s been many years that she aborted the children but her suffering never stop. Besides the emotional suffering, woman also suffers Post-Traumatic Stress disorder. Guilt is probably the most common symptom of a Post-Abortion-Syndrome. These symptoms appear five to ten years later in life. Not only mothers, but also partners, parents, siblings and other family members may experience post-abortion reactions, including guilt, anxiety and damaged relationships. Anybody who pressures a woman into having an abortion may later be unable to enjoy a relationship with that woman. After abortion, mother’s different kinds of complexes shows that they still carry a huge burdan of guilt, maybe as huge as having children and caring for them.
The consequences of an abortion can include guilt, depression, mourning, shame, self-hatred, regret, and sadness of a mother. Aborting a child has created much debate in our society. It is not considered a good act, morally or religious. It creates a sense of guilt in mothers . Like the auther of this poem, no one could be happy by making this decision. .Now, she is trying to justfy through this poem. She claims that she did love them with all her heart and she says to her babies:
“Believe me I love you all/believe me, I knew you, though fainty, and I loved, I loved all” (132).
(Words 526)
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Ghost Babies Haunted their Mothers
SKIP LINE BETWEEN TITLE AND BODY, ALSO BETWEEN PARAGRAPHS (UNLESS YOU INDENT).
“The mother” (CAP "MOTHER")is a poem about a woman who is guilty to have ("ABOUT HAVING"?) several abortions (COMMA) and she is regardful about ("REGRETTING"?) her decisions. But it seems to be that she has no other choice. As a mother, she is regardful (AWKWARD TERM) and could not do certain things which mother supposed to do with her kids. Through the use of mournful regret, (Gwendolyn Brooks) (WHY PARENTHESES?) shows how a woman’s choice to have an abortion reveals her regret and hAunted her emotionally for the rest of her life.
She is not proud of what she did. She is at fault (UNCLEAR) and is ashamed. The woman thinks that she is hAunted by her aborted children. Her guilt makes them live ("SEEM ALIVE"?). She hears ghostly voices of her killed children. This voice (PLURAL TO MATCH PREVIOUS SENTENCE.) reminded her of the pain they were going through during abortion. It might be possible that any how she justifies by others (COMMA) but she can’t forgive herself what she has done. She realizes that they were more than a blob of cells.
She seems to be regardful (UNCLEAR TERM) (COMMA) but she also claims that she made the right decision at the time. It might be possible that her financial crises lead her to make this decision (PLURAL?). If she gave birth to them, she wouldn't have been able to care for the children. Most parents make this decision because of their financial problems. They think they would have a better fate being dead than if they were in their care. People wonder who havn’t (SP) had an abortion that what would be a horrible situation that she couldn't care for her children. What would be worse than being dead? (IS THIS YOUR QUESTION OR THE CHARACTER'S QUESTION? IF IT IS YOURS, HAVE YOU EVER CONSIDERED THE PAIN OF BEING AN UNWANTED CHILD? THE DEAD DO NOT EXPERIENCE PAIN.)
Abortion can provide rapid relief but delayed suffering. It’s been many years that ("SINCE") she aborted the children (COMMA) but her suffering never stopS. Besides the emotional suffering, woman (THIS CHARACTER OR WOMEN WHO ABORT?) also suffers Post-Traumatic Stress disorder. Guilt is probably the most common symptom of a Post-Abortion-Syndrome. These symptoms ("GUILT" IS SINGULAR.) appear five to ten years later in life. Not only mothers, but also partners, parents, siblings and other family members may experience post-abortion reactions, including guilt, anxiety and damaged relationships. Anybody who pressures a woman into having an abortion may later be unable to enjoy a relationship with that woman. After abortion, mother’s different kinds of complexes (UNCLEAR TERM) shows ("SHOW") that they still carry a huge burdan (SP) of guilt, maybe as huge as having children and caring for them. (SENTENCE UNCLEAR.)
The consequences of an abortion can include guilt, depression, mourning, shame, self-hatred, regret, and sadness of a mother. Aborting a child has created much debate in our society. It is not considered a good act, morally or religious. It creates a sense of guilt in mothers . Like the auther (SP) of this poem, no one could be happy by making this decision. Now, she is trying to justfy (SP) (WHAT?) through this poem. She claims that she did love them with all her heart and she says to her babies:
“Believe me I love you all/believe me, I knew you, though fainty (SP), and I loved, I loved all” (132).
With many women who abort, the potential guilt is more than balanced by the reduction of the anxiety related to raising an unwanted child.
You needed to review your use of commas and make use a spell checker.
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/607/02/
In the future, if nobody is available to proofread your work, you can do this yourself. After writing your material, put it aside for a day — at least several hours. (This breaks mental sets you might have that keep you from noticing problems.) Then read it aloud as if you were reading someone else's work. (Reading aloud slows down your reading, so you are less likely to skip over problems.)
If your reading goes smoothly, that is fine. However, wherever you "stumble" in your reading, other persons are likely to have a problem in reading your material. Those "stumbles" indicate areas that need revising.
Another option, if it is available on your computer, is to have the computer read it to you.
Once you have made your revisions, repeat the process above. Good papers often require many drafts.
SKIP LINE BETWEEN TITLE AND BODY, ALSO BETWEEN PARAGRAPHS (UNLESS YOU INDENT).
“The mother” (CAP "MOTHER")is a poem about a woman who is guilty to have ("ABOUT HAVING"?) several abortions (COMMA) and she is regardful about ("REGRETTING"?) her decisions. But it seems to be that she has no other choice. As a mother, she is regardful (AWKWARD TERM) and could not do certain things which mother supposed to do with her kids. Through the use of mournful regret, (Gwendolyn Brooks) (WHY PARENTHESES?) shows how a woman’s choice to have an abortion reveals her regret and hAunted her emotionally for the rest of her life.
She is not proud of what she did. She is at fault (UNCLEAR) and is ashamed. The woman thinks that she is hAunted by her aborted children. Her guilt makes them live ("SEEM ALIVE"?). She hears ghostly voices of her killed children. This voice (PLURAL TO MATCH PREVIOUS SENTENCE.) reminded her of the pain they were going through during abortion. It might be possible that any how she justifies by others (COMMA) but she can’t forgive herself what she has done. She realizes that they were more than a blob of cells.
She seems to be regardful (UNCLEAR TERM) (COMMA) but she also claims that she made the right decision at the time. It might be possible that her financial crises lead her to make this decision (PLURAL?). If she gave birth to them, she wouldn't have been able to care for the children. Most parents make this decision because of their financial problems. They think they would have a better fate being dead than if they were in their care. People wonder who havn’t (SP) had an abortion that what would be a horrible situation that she couldn't care for her children. What would be worse than being dead? (IS THIS YOUR QUESTION OR THE CHARACTER'S QUESTION? IF IT IS YOURS, HAVE YOU EVER CONSIDERED THE PAIN OF BEING AN UNWANTED CHILD? THE DEAD DO NOT EXPERIENCE PAIN.)
Abortion can provide rapid relief but delayed suffering. It’s been many years that ("SINCE") she aborted the children (COMMA) but her suffering never stopS. Besides the emotional suffering, woman (THIS CHARACTER OR WOMEN WHO ABORT?) also suffers Post-Traumatic Stress disorder. Guilt is probably the most common symptom of a Post-Abortion-Syndrome. These symptoms ("GUILT" IS SINGULAR.) appear five to ten years later in life. Not only mothers, but also partners, parents, siblings and other family members may experience post-abortion reactions, including guilt, anxiety and damaged relationships. Anybody who pressures a woman into having an abortion may later be unable to enjoy a relationship with that woman. After abortion, mother’s different kinds of complexes (UNCLEAR TERM) shows ("SHOW") that they still carry a huge burdan (SP) of guilt, maybe as huge as having children and caring for them. (SENTENCE UNCLEAR.)
The consequences of an abortion can include guilt, depression, mourning, shame, self-hatred, regret, and sadness of a mother. Aborting a child has created much debate in our society. It is not considered a good act, morally or religious. It creates a sense of guilt in mothers . Like the auther (SP) of this poem, no one could be happy by making this decision. Now, she is trying to justfy (SP) (WHAT?) through this poem. She claims that she did love them with all her heart and she says to her babies:
“Believe me I love you all/believe me, I knew you, though fainty (SP), and I loved, I loved all” (132).
With many women who abort, the potential guilt is more than balanced by the reduction of the anxiety related to raising an unwanted child.
You needed to review your use of commas and make use a spell checker.
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/607/02/
In the future, if nobody is available to proofread your work, you can do this yourself. After writing your material, put it aside for a day — at least several hours. (This breaks mental sets you might have that keep you from noticing problems.) Then read it aloud as if you were reading someone else's work. (Reading aloud slows down your reading, so you are less likely to skip over problems.)
If your reading goes smoothly, that is fine. However, wherever you "stumble" in your reading, other persons are likely to have a problem in reading your material. Those "stumbles" indicate areas that need revising.
Another option, if it is available on your computer, is to have the computer read it to you.
Once you have made your revisions, repeat the process above. Good papers often require many drafts.
Thank you so much.