I'm looking forward to helping ...
Everything else sounds fine.
This is a thank you letter to a company. Please check it and let me know what you think. If I need to change something or its just fine. Check for any errors.
Thank you very much for taking the time to meet with me on April 14 regarding the position of Administrative Assistant.
Our conversation increased my already-significant interest in the position. I enjoyed learning more about ABC Company and was especially impressed by the plans you outlined to make ABC Company a better place. I am confident that I can make an immediate and significant contribution to the company.
Again, thank you for your time and interest. I'm looking forward to help make your company succeed.
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Not sure that you need that dash in "already-significant"
In the end, change "help" to "helping."
Better yet, you could say "I'm looking forward to contributing to the success of your company."
In the end, change "help" to "helping."
Better yet, you could say "I'm looking forward to contributing to the success of your company."
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