The woman’s face was tilting up because the man standing behind her, pulled on her short, blonde her.
Is is the right way to fix this misplaced modifier or parallel structure?
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That doesn't make any sense.
Original sentence:
The man is standing behind the woman and pulls on her short, blonde hair tilting her face up.
How about this?
The man is standing behind the woman and tilting her face up, while he pulls on her short, blonde hair.
You have to use your imagination a bit -- and make sure it makes sense!!
The man is standing behind the woman and pulls on her short, blonde hair tilting her face up.
How about this?
The man is standing behind the woman and tilting her face up, while he pulls on her short, blonde hair.
You have to use your imagination a bit -- and make sure it makes sense!!
your instructor will check the report when you finish for accuracy
You should, do you either your homework or practice your clarinet.
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