The topic is about what aspires me. What I want to do in the future. Well I want to be a veterinarian. But I am not allowed to use I, me, myself,you, yourself, or overusing words.

Answer 1

Brooke, check the sites I gave you in your previous post.

Essay writing - GuruBlue, Thursday, September 24, 2009 at 12:23pm
This site gives you the essentials for writing formal essays. It will give you an explanation and example of each part.

http://www.apurnell.com/cs1readings/ElementsAndStructure.htm

Answer 2

This site may also help you.

http://www.kcl.ac.uk/teares/nmvc/studyskills/academicwriting/page_37.htm