The second poem I will write about is ‘the conscript’ it was written by Wilfred Gibson in 1917. a law was passed to force men to join up between the ages of 18-41 unless they were ill this poems says what you’re really going to expect from the war if you join up you’re going to die for your country.

Question

At the start of the poem he uses the words ‘indifferent and flippant’ indifferent meaning you have no interest in it (poor quality) flippant meaning a look of seriousness a flippant attitude to money. He says that ‘the doctors sit in the glare of an electric light watching the endless stream of naked white bodies’ this shows the doctors have got used to see the naked white bodies and the use of the words ‘white bodies’ suggests death. These soldiers are going to their deaths.
Gibson writes about a ‘living death’ and ‘darkened brain’. Living death is the meaning for they are so badly injured they might as well be dead and darkened brain is that they are mentally and physically affected and that their dreams are dark meaning that they are nightmares. He uses the word hasty this is the meaning for happening suddenly and quickly often without enough care or thought so the soldiers will quickly go into the war zone and die and not think about if they will survive or not.

The narrator shudders at the sight of one young man and he ends with a description of Christ on the cross. Gibson is suggesting that this soldier is a sacrifice just like the image of Christ on the cross Jesus was sacrificed. This is a very powerful phrase because he is suggesting that these men are not really fit for war but because so many have lost their lives the country needs more men whether they are fit or not to protect their country .

Answer 1

Is this a continuation of a longer essay you're working on? The first paragraph doesn't read like an intro to an independent essay.

Also get rid of all "I" and "you" (and all their forms) instances in this paper. Then try again.

Answer 2

The second poem, "The Conscript", Wilfred Gibson, 1917; Was written in response to a law (Where?, Why? during what conflict?) which conscripted all men between eighteen and forty-one years of age, unless they were too ill to serve. The poem lays out the grim realities of war.

My first throw edit. Please notice the differences in length and punctuation. :)

Answer 3

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Answer 4

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