The paragraph below needs to be made more coherent. Use repetition, synonyms, and pronouns to link the sentences. Type the improved paragraph in the space provided on the following page. Many cities are easily distinguished by their skylines. In such cities--New York and Paris, for example--certain buildings are so distinctive that the buildings have come to represent New York and Paris. Just a glance at the skyline's profile tells the viewer of the profile what city is pictured.

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The paragraph below needs to be made more coherent. Use repetition, synonyms, and pronouns to link the sentences. Type the improved paragraph in the space provided on the following page.    Many cities are easily distinguished by their skylines. In such cities--New York and Paris, for example--certain buildings are so distinctive that the buildings have come to represent New York and Paris. Just a glance at the skyline's profile tells the viewer of the profile what city is pictured.

GuruBlue · Answer

Lisa, we are not going to do your homework for you. The assignment says to use pronouns - synonyms - and repetition.....

Find nouns that are repeated, think of subsitutes for those that would make the paragraph more coherent. Then repost and we will be happy to make further suggestions/corrections if needed.

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