"the opportunity to dedicate my life to my passion is something I do not intend to let go of"

Is this grammatically correct?

3 answers

Technically it is not correct because you've ended the sentence with a preposition. It's also unnecessarily wordy and negative.

How about?

I intend to dedicate my life to my passion.
Nothing else excites me more than dedicating my life to my passion.

how's this?
That is excellent!