The best revision to introduce hyperbole and make the description more vivid would be to "replace 'hours' with 'the rest of my life'." This exaggerates the impact of the loud music and emphasizes the intensity of the experience.
The music played so loud I knew my ears would be ringing for hours. The band rocked. We thumped our feet to the beat and shouted along with the lyrics.
Which revision would introduce hyperbole to make the description more vivid?
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add “at the top of our lungs” after “shouted”
replace “rocked” with “was on fire”
replace “hours” with “the rest of my life”
add “like maniacs” after “shouted”
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