The music played so loud I knew my ears would be ringing for hours. The band rocked. We thumped our feet to the beat and shouted along with the lyrics. Which revision would introduce hyperbole to make the description more vivid?

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The music blasted so loudly that I was convinced my ears would be ringing until the end of time. The band rocked like a thousand thunderclaps, and we thumped our feet to the beat as if we were trying to shake the very ground itself, shouting along with the lyrics as if the world depended on it.