Good luck with that Sydney.
XD
The line you quoted would work better if it was: "One by one THE towns pass by"
In that case, the last syllable, "by", would be stressed and it would imitate the rhythm of a railroad train:
CLICK clack CLICK clack CLICK clack CLICK
As it is, it does that anyway, without the "the".
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Thank you for your help :)