The economy is influenced by many factors that determine its surplus or deficit.
Throughout the last several decades, we have seen the world’s dependency on oil and
gas. Also, oil and gas are among two of the most important resources in the globe. As the
demand for oil and gas grows, the American family spends an average of $200 to $300 in
gasoline every month. Oil and gas continue to be major contributors to the stability or instability,
of the larger economies, such as those of the United States, Germany, and Japan, and the
third-world nations as well. The high price of crude oil has seriously affected all aspects of the
american economy from basic transportation to the high cost of consumer goods; however,
finding a solution is no easy task when dealing with such a complex global
issues.
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The economy is influenced by many factors that determine its surplus or deficit. << Surplus and deficit of what?
As the demand for oil and gas grows, the American family spends an average of $200 to $300 in gasoline every month. << What is your source for this statistic? Are you including heating oil? Please explain.
Oil and gas continue to be major contributors to the stability or instability, of the larger economies, such as those of the United States, Germany, and Japan, and the third-world nations as well. << Do you mean oil and gas PRICES? Have Bangladesh, Congo, Nepal, Albania, and other countries' economies been hurt by these high prices? Source?
however, finding a solution is no easy task when dealing with such a complex global issues. << Is this one issue or several ISSUES? Please explain what you mean by "complex global issues."
What question are you trying to answer?
What is your thesis statement?
I'm having a hard time trying to figure out why you're writing this paragraph and what you want to prove.
Following are my comments upon what you have written.
The economy is influenced by many factors that determine its surplus or deficit. << Surplus and deficit of what?
As the demand for oil and gas grows, the American family spends an average of $200 to $300 in gasoline every month. << What is your source for this statistic? Are you including heating oil? Please explain.
Oil and gas continue to be major contributors to the stability or instability, of the larger economies, such as those of the United States, Germany, and Japan, and the third-world nations as well. << Do you mean oil and gas PRICES? Have Bangladesh, Congo, Nepal, Albania, and other countries' economies been hurt by these high prices? Source?
however, finding a solution is no easy task when dealing with such a complex global issues. << Is this one issue or several ISSUES? Please explain what you mean by "complex global issues."
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