Revise the following sentences to make one of the existing sentences subordinate to the other.
People know they are going to have to retire; they often do not save enough money to do so comfortably. (this one is my answer, but I like the second one better)
People know they are going to retire, and often do not save enough money to do so comfortably
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I would use the second one; however I would use 'but' in place of 'and'
Neither sentence has one of the clauses subordinate to the other.
Start with "Although" followed by the second clause; then use the first clause as the independent clause.
What do you get?
Start with "Although" followed by the second clause; then use the first clause as the independent clause.
What do you get?
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