Professors embracing multiculturalism encourage students of all races to succeed.
There's the first one. I'll be glad to comment on your revisions of the other sentences.
Revise the following sentences so that the subject and verb of each sentence identify key actors and actions:
• The dedication of professors to multiculturalism is crucial to encouraging students of all races to succeed.
o To encourage students of all races to succeed, it is crucial that professors be dedicated to multiculturalism.
• Currently, the percentage of full-time African-American professors teaching in American universities is less than eight.
In American Universities less than eight percent of African-American professors are currently teaching full time.
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ok i'm working on it
African American professors teaching full time at American universities is less than eight percent
Less than eight percent of the professors at American Universities are African American.
Less than eight percent of the professors at American Universities are African American.
No.
Eight percent are -- doesn't clearly identify the key actors and actions.
Eight percent are -- doesn't clearly identify the key actors and actions.
In American Universities African-American professors are currently teaching full time.
In American Universities less than eight percent of the professors are African American
In American Universities less than eight percent of the professors are African American
You haven't changed the subject and verb.
i'm going back to the books
Less than eight percent of African-American professors are teaching full-time in American Universities.
would that work Ms. Sue?
would that work Ms. Sue?
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