1.Revise the following sentences so that the subject and verb of each sentence identify key actors and actions:

Question

•The dedication of professors to multiculturalism is crucial to encouraging students of all races to succeed.

•Currently, the percentage of full-time African-American professors teaching in American universities is less than eight.

Answers:

To encourage students of all races to succeed, it is crucial that professors be dedicated to multiculturalism.

Less than eght percent of African American professers and teaching full time in American universities.

Answer 1

Less than eight percent of African American professers are currentlyteaching full time in American universities.

Answer 2

In the first sentence, your subject is "it" and the verb is "is." That doesn't clearly identify the key actors and actions.

Can you improve the second sentence?
subject: percent
verb: are teaching

Answer 3

Eight percent of African American professors have currently taught full time

Answer 4

Ms.Sue may you please review these answers?

Professors embracing multiculturalism encourage students of all races to succeed.

Less than eight percent of African American professors are currently teaching full time in American universities.