The planet Jupiter, named for the king of the Roman gods, has rings composed of dust particles ejected during impact with incoming comets and asteroids.
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The planet Jupiter, named for the king of the ancient gods, has rings made of small particles resulting from collisions with comets and asteroids.
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The planet Jupiter, named for the king of the Roman gods, has rings composed of dust particles ejected during impact with incoming comets and asteroids.
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Jupiter and Roman
rings and dust
composed and ejected
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